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Summer Tea Time by rosuuri Summer Tea Time by rosuuri

Guest art for :iconmbtea: 's Artbook!
I contributed a total of 4 pages: Illustration page, extra page full of chibis, a walk-through of this piece and a translucent art card.

Looking at this reminds me of how much I slaved myself drawing the background /wipes tears
Close-up shots will be posted in Tumblr - rosuuri.tumblr.com/post/905798… !


Print Available: Storenvy

characters Pinku and March from Alice's Cross © rosuuri

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Given 2014-07-31
Suggester said: "I really like the ambiance rosuuri drawings give off. Her trademark of using hard lights and shadows to her art's advantage is really remarkable and will definitely catch anyone's attention."

Summer Tea Time by rosuuri ( Suggested by 0w0b and Featured by cinyu )
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Okay, So I'd like to start out by saying this is an absolutely gorgeous piece! Your lighting and details are splendid! It's obvious you put a lot of work into it. It's a very relaxing picture, and I can't help but wonder what she is looking at. Her little grin is adorable as well~ I love the details on the cake and the rabbit. I've studied this for a while, so here begins my critique. Please do not take this harshly, I love your works.

-Her legs are a bit weird when you first look at them (The position) But its quickly fixed with a little closer inspection.

-Personally, I like pictures that tell a story, Without and prior knowledge of your manga, this probably would be lost on me. Sorry if I'm being nit picky, I just prefer them that way.

-The grass is a little thin and short, but I'm not a grass professional, and that's usually left for the artist to decide.

That's actually it. That's all I can really critique, since the rest is very very pretty.

Very nice job, Ms. Rosuuri!
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I must say, I absolutely love this! This is a great piece. There are so many details that I probably couldn't even begin to add to my own pieces of work at my current skill level, and they fit very well. I especially love the ways you shined the light of the sun on the character. I love how you drew the background and the grass, along with the character and the details of the rabbit. This whole piece makes a peaceful scenery, and I love how I'm filled with a sense of calm while looking at this piece. Everything looks great and perfect at a first glance.

However, there are some subtle mistakes/errors I see in this piece that are noticeable on this piece at a second glance. Let's start from top to bottom. One, I noticed that the character's face looks a fit flat. The side of the face, that faces away from the viewer, looks like it's a little too thin and pushed together. Makes it look a little flat and without definition, though the definition is clearly visible. I also notice with a second glance that if you were to remove the teacup, her chin would be uncharacteristically chubby compared to her cheeks and the rest of her body.

Now lets start with that hand holding the teacup handle. If I were to do that specific hand pose while holding the cup, my hand would be in a great amount of discomfort. It's an odd hand pose that makes her look like she's about to claw the cup, and overall most people would not even think of holding a teacup in that way. I would suggest making only the index finger and thumb that curved, and leaving the rest in a curled down/withdrawn position.

Last but not least, let's get to the leg closest to the rabbit/viewer. It looks noticeably shorter than the one next to it, and that kneecap looks a bit off with the position of the calf. You should make that leg a bit longer and have the curve of the calf a bit longer and thinner.

Overall, I'd give this piece an 8/10. The overall presentation, at first glance, is superb, but upon closer examination there are obvious errors that the artist would usually miss/overlook. Hope this helped!
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Time-Signature Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
Beautiful!
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yusukerr Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so amazing!! i love the lightingFoxy loves 
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vlewis123 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is truly amazing <3 I really love every piece that you put out there. Keep it up! 
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Spikey---chan Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I love the lightning!!! and the complete image is mesmerizing!!! really awesome and lovely work!!! it goes into favs+ and a print surelly for my desk to always look at♥
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kitty-kawai Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*lighting
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Caitlinchan Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kawaii*
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kitty-kawai Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD BUT I LIKE MY USER NAME KAWAI
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fantasyvocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
The details in this picture is definitely incredible. And that little white bunny is so cutee~!!
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iarebj Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  New member
How long did it take you to finish this beautiful art? :3
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mentallyhandicapped Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How long does it take you to do something like this? If you don't mind me asking
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