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UPDATE 9/23/2014: Shirt available!
The graphic t-shirt is available on sale here - otakumode.com/store
Recently, I became a special creator in ToM too q v q - otakumode.com/rosuuri
UPDATE 6/24/2014: I won! I got a place!!!
Thank you very much for all the support you've given! sobs hard I love you guys
It's going to be printed on a shirt and will be sold on ToM! This is the first ever legit contest I've won /rolls on floor
I joined Tokyo Otaku Mode just so I can enter this contest because I love Steins;Gate so much! I'm really glad janirotluvx recommended it to me. The contest is judged based on the number of Suki/Likes and I need them badly O|-<
I don't usually join contests which is a battle of likes/favorites because i've lost quite a number of times (haha cries I didn't win a single time btw) but I'm giving this one a try!Title: Time Machine
Character: Makise Kurisu
Series: Steins;Gate
Wip posts - twitter.com/rosuuri/status/466… & twitter.com/rosuuri/status/466…;
Illustration by Rosuuri
Copyright © Tokyo Otaku Mode
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Overall Vision Originality Technique
ImpactThis piece is really pleasing!
The only three things I could critique you about are a few things I'd like to see you 'push'.
I would like to see you push the background depth to make me feel like I'm being sucked into a vortex.
Consequently, pushing the vortex depth would, perhaps, cause some extra ambient light and effects that would affect the metal surfaces of the cog the character is sitting on.
One last thing, it appears she's holding some sort of smart phone, PDA, or control device. I'd like to see some ambient light from the screen or buttons hit her face, an aura where the scree/buttons would be, and perhaps some glowies on the back. [Teal, turquoise, Seafoam, and Bahama are my favorite for such effects]
Please keep in mind that this is not a 'hard critique'. As in I'm not saying anything is 'wrong' with this piece. It's beautiful, and effective in telling a story; especially when coupled with the title.
All three point that I have offered are personal preferences that, if executed together, would make me absolutely go GA-GA over this pic.
Keep up the good work!